Journal is a mathcore band based in Sacramento who released Unlorja, their debut album, last year. For the most part, Journal present pretty much what I’d expect from a mathcore band and they do it well if not spectacularly. In truth, Unlorja does more to get me excited about this band than about the album itself.
For starters, this is obviously very heavy, a bit spastic in places, fairly technical (if not brilliantly so), and has a proggy sense of schizophrenia. My gripes are twofold. Journal spends a bit too much time on instrumental passages that feel arbitrary and I could have done with a bit more variation in some places.
The vocal styles on this album are very diverse, ranging from a frenzied shriek to a growl to a typical hardcore holler to something like crooning on “Festooned with Snakes.” The clean vocals, which pop up here and there are the only ones I could really do without. They just sound so colorless and bland.
If you’ve heard more than a few extreme metal albums, you’ve probably heard better guitar playing than this but, make no mistake, these guys are good. There are snippets of straight up death metal, of pseudo speed metal with rapid fire soloing, of melodic post-hardcore, but I wish Journal did a better job combining the different facets of their sound, rather than just kind of shifting between them. Since the band was insistent on including instrumental passages—there are three short interludes totaling about three minutes in length—I wish they could have made them a bit more interesting.
I also wish the drumming were more varied. It’s basically just blastbeats for 80% of the record, and not a much in the way of intricacy. It might help to think of this as mathy deathcore. These guys don’t really intertwine chaos and melody like The Dillinger Escape Plan. They don’t create the sort of bone-crushing heaviness of Converge, nor do they have the songwriting chops of Botch.
The final track on the album is a half-hour long narrative called “Affinity,” in which a woman’s voice tells some sci-fi story about two warring races over orchestral sounds, some pretty acoustic guitar, and heavy passages that fade in and out periodically. By this point, the album’s been playing for almost 50 minutes, and this track is kind of a snorefest but I do appreciate the fact that this band is willing to be as melodic, as spacey, and frankly, as un-metal as they are on this track. I just wish they did a better job incorporating that into the rest of the album.
Unlorja is adequately heavy, chaotic, and technical but this really could have been whittled down to something about 40 minutes long. I think these guys could come out with something really great but Unlorja isn’t it.